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Tuesday, July 8, 2014

Sample Narrative Writing : " White Death"

Mercury level had dropped to -10°C. Thick layer of snow had concealed everything and the whole landscape was painted white. It was just another ordinary day for Nanga Perbat, a place devoid of any life except the occasional visits by the climbing fanatics who dared to step on its surface.
Yusf, Ahmed and Ali were three professional climbers and apart from this very close friends. Winter had reluctantly arrived but with the start of January the weather had gone berserk. With its complex and challenging topography, it was one of the most challenging peaks in the northern areas of Pakistan. The trio had taken up the challenge and contrived to excel the seemingly impossible peak in such an abominable weather conditions.

After the grueling journey of five hours from Islamabad they finally reached the base camp if the Nanga Perbat. Stepping out of the car, the cold dry wind slapped their faces and indicated the danger up ahead.  After assessing the situation and defying all the odds the three friends started setting up their camp. Ahmed being the senior and the most experienced summoned the other two inside.

“Look! The weather is nothing what we had earlier thought of. What do you say? Should we move ahead?” he inquired, expressing his grave concerns.

“We should take up the challenge. There is no going back,” retorted Ali, the youngest.

After a heated discussion about their plans, they finally decided to move on.
Cladded in thick suits and covered from head to toe, they came out of the camp carrying their bulky backpacks. The sun was now at its peak and the snow shimmered like the glittering gold. The azure sky was clear and they stood in awe admiring the beauty of the magnificent peak that they dared to surpass.
“Let’s go,” exclaimed Ahmed, brimming with confidence and determination.  They finally set on the arduous journey. Only one hour had passed by now that the things started to go amiss. The loose ice on mountain slope got detached. The snow cam bursting through the trees and all the tree climbers were taken by surprise. Stream of snow took the three friends in different directions and their communication broke down. Once again Nanga Perbat was in grave silence. The mighty peak stood vindictive and apparently it had taught the lesson to those who try to stand in its defiance.
Sudden moment of the ice broke the silence. Ali somehow managed to gain his consciousness back. He gathered his courage and started the hunt for other two. There was no sign of life anywhere. It was a difficult time for him but he had taken up the responsibility to save his friends. By now apprehension was gnawing him and the frigid weather was deflating his spirits as he searched here and there in vain.

Feeling dejected at his failure, he decided to give up. When was just about to sit down underneath the only pine tree, he got a glimpse of familiar human hand protruding from the snow. A wild excitement rushed through him and stared to dig the snow madly with his bare hands with a renewed vigor and determination. He stood there petrified as he saw Ahmed and Yusf under the snow motion less. He wasted no time and sent an emergency signal for help through his transmitter and started to perform CPR. He had feared that he might dead but a feeble moment of their  hand gave him a glimmer of how as tear pricked his eyes.

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